Optimistic haiku

Nubes amenazando

For Tin, whose family is going through some changes these days.

Detrás de nubes
Luce un sol brillante
Saldrá, amigo

A rough translation:

Behind the gray clouds
Shines a beautiful, bright sun
It will come out, friend

5 Responses to “Optimistic haiku”

  1. Alejandro says:

    if you don’t mind, I’m going to recite this to myself all day.

  2. Marlene says:

    I agree with Alejandro! Succinct but open to interpretation!

  3. Diego says:

    I like it.

  4. tin says:

    mil gracias cindylu, it had been a long while since someone wrote me a poem, which for me, is one of the most beautiful gifts you can give. take care of yourself, and make sure to nurture your hearth.
    peace.

  5. EL CHAVO! says:

    Nice and perfect picture for the haiku. El tiempo pasa y el corazon se compone.

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